Such a nice, clever preview. Really, I was getting so excited about it and then...*sigh* another promising story abandoned by time. I've done the same, over and over again, but this is just sounds so good... Anyway, lovely fic. Have a good day.

::wants cookie::

I'd *love* to see more of this. I find Hojo a fascinating character, and it's always good to see more written about him. Your perspective on his character is something I find very interesting, too. The way you use language is great, and you capture Hojo's character very well. This was a fantastic prolgue; you really caught my interest and made me want more. I hope you'll continue. :)

Wow...I like this. Please continue. I love Hojo. I didn't think there was any other author besides me nowadays who'll come to his defense.

Yay! Hojo fic!

Odd, you might say, considering I write a lot of Vin. But I am fascinated with Hojo's perspective. Just fascinated.

Interested to see where you'll go with this.

~Cendrillo

Good writing, you caught my interess!
There will be a second chapter, right??

I have just seen the introduction to this story and I must say, I am looking forward to seeing how where you take this! Keep up the good work!