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| NanakiClaws 2005-06-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseIt's really great, continue your good work. I like your writhing style. ^_^ |
| NelZelpher88 2005-06-02 ch 2, | abuseNice story, I love the detail! I wouldnt worry about it too much. I cant wait till the next chapter. Dont rush into the characters so much but dont set them apart as well. I love the AlbelXNel I cant wait to see how that turns out. HEHE he's got pony tails ^^;; sorry bout that! But yes I like how you parred them together. |
| Inkster 2004-12-28 ch 1, | abuseBravo! I like it for a pre-beginning. ^.^ Kind of got that "What's going to happen?" But one question though... which one are you basing it on? I only have Till the End of time. Unfortunately. Anyway, I like the formate of it so far. I shall read more when you post again. Oh by the way... you don't always have to play the whole game. ^.~. Unlike me... I go on PS2 Underground and the people there tells me a lot of things! ^.^ Made a lot of good friends. Anyway, Keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for a new chapter! Ja ne, ~*^.^*~ Snow Guardian |
| dark672 2004-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseit's good |
| Magus Black 2004-12-18 ch 1, | abusehmm Which one are you doing. The 'Second Story' and 'Till the End of Time' I've played for a while, but I have no knowledge on the first game. But I see potnetal. I'll stay and watch. |