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Bobboky
2006-06-21 . chapter 3
nice
pong
2005-02-10 . chapter 2
dident drac say you can onlly turn vurgins of the opposet sex?
Jaryd Alderis
2005-02-02 . chapter 3
I like your story, keep it going. I hope I don'
t have to wait too long for the next chapter.
pong
2004-12-31 . chapter 1
i like this, its more intresting then your sm cross
Gopu
2004-12-29 . chapter 3
Great chapter
Eric Oh
2004-12-28 . chapter 3
If Ranma has become vampire, I wonder how he survives the daylight. No one else has that kind of power as a vampire except Alucard and only reason is because he is THE Vampire, the count Dracula. Of course, that depends on what you are following, manga or the anime. However, in the second season of the anime, you will still find out that Alucard is Count Dracula so it makes no difference where you are coming from. As it is, you mention Incognito and Incognito is not introduced in the manga yet from where US has released the manga if he will ever be introduced. But honestly speaking, I really can't see Incognito doing what he does, he did to Ranma as his purpose is destruction and ultimate power, not his own destruction or to raise a plaything.
Campin' Carl
2004-12-28 . chapter 3
I enjoy this story. I really do. On another note...Tai Khan. Your review is funny because it's WRONG.

1) Do you understand anything about dojo fights? He let her fight because he challenged the TENDO dojo. Not Ranma Saotome, the Tendo dojo.

2) I would like you to go watch someone get brutally murdered, and then tell me you aren't going to change your way of life somehow. I have almost died enough times, to know that no ones life is more important then my own. Believable.

3) The Umisenken was sealed, so he wouldn't use it. Why would he, anyway? It's not like it's a "martial arts cooking" restaurant where they can detect ki. Believable.

So far, I could definitely see this happening. The story is darker then a Ranma story should be, but lighter then Hellsing. Nice mix.
pspinler
2004-12-28 . chapter 3
Very, very impressive. This tory is grabbing me by the throat and demanding that I read it.

Hm, in terms of writing, I see few errors, and it flows well. Very competetent. Good characterizations. I like the way you're portraying ranma as, uhm, not exactly quick on the uptake and willing to rationalize to himself.

Becuase I am fond of the character, I hope that he comes out okay at the end. But whatever happens, good luck, and thanks!

-- Pat
TannimU
2004-12-27 . chapter 3
Damn! This is getting way past kewl. What is reality and what is incognito playing with Ranma? I can't wait to find out, if we ever do. It'll be interesting to see how Ranma deals with the various hunters that will be after him as well. Great job, keep it up!
Silverscale
2004-12-27 . chapter 3
...cool.
Gopu
2004-12-22 . chapter 2
Great chapter
GorunNova
2004-12-22 . chapter 2
god damn there is finally a good ranma fic out here. has gone so down in quality i barely check anymore... It's sad really. Anyways this is a good fic and i hope you continue this. Make ranma evil or something. I'd enjoy that and i bet others might as well :) It shakes away a bit of the massive cliche of how ranma takes the power of whatever anime he crosses over to and then becoming the good guy to save the day and all. good luck writing this and hope you dont ever get writer's block.
Yuki Suichi
2004-12-20 . chapter 1
more more more. you know i've never read a cross between hellsing and ranma, and i have to say it's very well written, please keep up the good work and i look foward to more of this story!
tsuki yomi
2004-12-19 . chapter 1
please keep going you truly have a great fic here.I look forward to the next chapter!
Tai Khan
2004-12-19 . chapter 1
Hmm, well, the basic premise of Ranma pursuing a vampire that had killed Akane (and possibly the rest of the Tendos) is a believable one. That Ranma would allow Akane to face a challenger to the Anything-Goes style that he knew nothing about and hadn't checked out thoroughly... NOT believable!

Ranma going to England in pursuit of Incognito, again believable. Ranma walking away from a fight with the undead, without offering ANY aide to the defenders of the Hellsing House... NOT believable!

Ranma stealing a meal from a restaurant (presumably due to a lack of money)... believable. Ranma not employing the Umisen-ken to accomplish said theft... NOT believable!

Overall, this isn't that bad... if one isn't all that familiar with Ranma 1/2. On the other, if one is familiar with Ranma 1/2, then there are some discrepancies that just don't seem right somehow.
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