wow , kept giving me butterflies in my stomach , great job , i wish it was longer though x3

Great. Thoughtful. Good characterisation.

Did you purposely change the story about Scott's family?

I entered "Scott" into the search and found this. It was very good, if a little short. Especially sense this was written when most of the stories here were either "Kurtty" or "Let's introduce a new and mysterious mutant" ... oh, wait, it's still like that. Oh well. Anyway, good story. I like how it illustrates that Scott isn't the only needy one in the relationship. I haven't read the reviews, but I'm sure you've gotten several comments about Alex already so I won't beat a dead horse. Anyway, very good, I like the idea of Jean being co-dependant. Maybe that's why she's so bossy?

teehee i know you've probably gotten this before but the whole parents dying...plane...yeah but you got the part of why he cant control his blasts right so I give you credit all in all i thought it was really good!

wow this was well good. but i swear scotts parents died in a plane crash. but it was good! i really liked it.

more you have to write more

i liked how you showed Jean's character not being selfish all the time and that she really does care for Scott. brilliant fic.

oh wow *wide opened mouth* that was v different and utterly lovely:)

Really well done first person. I love the way you show Jean. Good job.

definitely liked this story!

Beautiful work. Loved it. -Kate

::sniff:: that was so sad...but it was a really good story... It was so deep...::cries:: Poor Scott!

Beautiful.

Very good!

Well, that wasn't *exactly* what happened to Scott's parents, but it was a good story nonetheless. Nice use of first person narrative.