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| Strych9 2008-03-25 ch 11,  | abuseTwo things. 1. I'm really sorry I haven't reviewed since I started following this (Somewhere around chapter three. -.-;); and 2, have you abandoned this or do you plan on finishing it someday? I really miss your peculiar mix of seriousness and humor. Not many people can pull that off. |
| marajade963 2006-03-09 ch 11, | abuseYou've captured our loveable theif perfectly. Wow. what a great read. Well written!! |
| DesertRose 2005-11-27 ch 10, anon. | abuseThat was incredibly cute and fun to read. You had Rikku perfectly in character, it sounded exactly like she actually wrote it. I liked the story, the icky jelly Something, and that cute fluff with Gippal in the end. Nice job! =D |
| Me 2005-10-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseAnti-Death to Rikku! |
| kairiyuna14 2005-10-10 ch 9, anon. | abuseaw poor Riku, please update soon. i have to know what happens. |
| Furitaurus 2005-09-17 ch 2, | abuseAll i saw was 'I tore my clothes off' LOL. A slightly short chapter, but i kinda like short, punchy chapters, don't know why. Tres amusant Tagg. |
| Furitaurus 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abuseLOL. Very funny Tagg, you have captured Rikku's hyperactive personality very well. It's like reading a book by Louise Rennison, specifically one of her 'Confessions by Georgia Nicolson' books. These, by the way, are very funny and have a similar hyperactive tone to them. A good laugh and I intend to enjoy the subsequent chapters. I think i only noticed one mistake: 7th paragraph, you forgot to put a space between 'I' and 'was' |
| Anrixan 2005-06-19 ch 5, | abuse*bows head in shame* Ugh, I am a horrible friend! I just realized taht I haven't read the last two chapters of this...so I just did! They were awesome...and again...MY GOD you can write Rikku so well. I still want a blue-green (hee hee) fox too...So if you find one, can you UPS it to me? Anyway, this was fantastic. :) |
| Ikonopeiston 2005-05-11 ch 5, | abuseSo keep truckin' girl. This is an addictive read. No complaints for a change. |
| Grendya 2005-05-09 ch 5, anon. | abuselol. luv the story |
| TalkingMime 2005-05-08 ch 4, | abuseYou've captured Rikku's personality well, and her train of thought, or something that's probably similar to it anyway. It was an enjoyable read. |
| Ikonopeiston 2005-05-08 ch 4, | abuseYou are the queen of free association. This may be short but it is prime. It functions well as a transition chapter. Now, put living on hold for a while and get back to creating! You inhabit Rikku well and I find your understanding of her bravado entirely believable. I can see her in this chapter. Nicely done. |
| ArcaneWeapon 2005-02-06 ch 3, | abuseTagg you are the master of Rikku! You write her so well! The story is great so far and I really liked Damon :) I like the city of unsent too, very interesting idea! I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| Anrixan 2005-01-30 ch 3, | abusehave i ever told you that you have a natural gift for writing for rikku? I laughed so hard...kudos on the 'boof' sound...lol. And the turquoise thing was brilliant. you brought up a valuable point...why not just say blue green?!? lol I did notice one tiny mistake...you spelled 'awful' incorrectly. Also...you wrote "midges." Did you mean "Midgets?" If not...what's a midge? lol. Other than that, you were golden. :) |
| Lai17 2005-01-29 ch 3, | abuse*Clicks Go and hopefully makes Tagg Happy* I like this story lol,It's really well written and i didn't see any errors but it is 2:20 in the morning so my eye's might be a tad off. Anyways I will be keeping a look out for your next chapter. One more thing though,What is it with you and calling us "Sea-monkeys"? lol |