This is quite cool. I don't like the ending but still. The insanity is awesome

I don't know what anyone else thought of it, but I thinks its really good.

Very cool.. kind of freaky and surreal. I like it. D

More please

This has cought me like a fish on a hook. More please!

Anything about Lews I love, he is the best. We might be seeing a lot of this kind of narrative in the next book anyhow. That sort of living two lives at once deal, Rand did seem to get pretty in touch with Lews in that cell, It just might be. If you like writing about the Age of Legends I encourage you to write more, I love that stuff. " The Road to the Spear", and " The Dedicated" are 2 of my fav chapters in the whole series.

okay this is freaky, this is always what i thought would have happened... that whole ishamael theory got me started... i like it, try to write about other ashamon like mazrim... i think they all inherit a personality from before... kinda like those with the power are recycled through the wheel, so mazrim might have lews therins best friend or something

Nice! I like the way the story shifts back and forth between Lews Therin and Rand. Very well done, I'm amazed this hasn't gotten any more reviews.