It was good and i would to see if he passes out in battle or something, thanx for you reviewing me, and maybe i will make another poem in ABABAB... instead of ABCBDBEBFBGBHBIB...i will continue you review your stuff as much as i can

This is nice, you are a good writer, and it keeps me waitning for more even though it wasn't that captivating. please review my poem on OMF.