great chapter a bit short but thank you for sharing it please update again a.s.a.l.a.

Horde should be spelled 'Hoard'. JRR Tolkien couldn't be wrong. 'Horde' would be a mob of Mongols sacking Peking.
Chapters are good but short and long between, but that just means its easier to read a few prior chapters to refresh.
Ciao,
Wes

Hengeyokai are different than the "Sunset People", for instance there are Hakken in Japan in the place of Garou, basicaly the same species, but with a drastically altered culture(serving a Daimyo, no Lupus, ect.).

Nice enough, but its been a while. Had to read from the beginning to refresh. Looking forward to the next.
Ciao

The Randomly capitalized words Are very Distracting

GREAT CHAPTER! (*x3) and tranning start.

GREAT CHAPTER! (*x3) Ren is so right about Ranma.

Fascinating story. Is there any Gold Digger connection?
Wes

Weird. Very weird. But still good to read.

very interesting.
i find it most interesting that nabiki or one of the others haven't accidently shifted while ranma was around.
so how will ren react to being hit by a large chi blast?
and how long until ranma just snaps and runs off on a "training trip" without plans of coming back...oh lets say america and...maybe atlanta, maybe meets a family with the last name of Diggers, its a thought.

great chapter, hope for more

Interesting... and you're right, your style does grow on one, although you do have distinct grammar errors outside of dialogue that would need to be cleared up (such as omitting certain words and then that spell-checker thing of replacing words...), but the 'special-ness' (as I am wont to say) of this fic is enough to allow one to overlook such errors as being 'trivial'.

As such, I shall grant you an 'A-minus with honors'.

I am looking forward to further Contributions. :)

Alex Ultra: Trivialities Are Sometimes The Most Important Parts
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I just finish reading chapter 1-7 and I LOVE THEM!

Just one problem, Ren LOST the bet, and therefore CANNOT dictate the terms. If a bet is made, and not terms given, then it is the WINNER of the bet that dictates the terms, and the loser hopes for leniency.

Interesting fight with Akane in the dojo, and nice of Ren to poke Ranma ego, and he is right, if all a person would have to do is meow and break Ranma's concentration, then that's half the battle there.

*apearce in front of Kuno and shouts at hi mwhile throwing lightning at the lunatic* I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE! IF YOU WON'T STOP TALKING THEN I WILL MAKE YOU STOP MYSELF! *After twenty five lightning bolts the extra crispy kuno groaned painfully before he fell down, unconscious* At last. *disappeares in a bright flash of light*