I am so very very confused.

I assume there was a server problem I didn't notice that spawned this but seriously; canine computer souls? This is so WTF I can't decide whether it's hilarious or just baffling.

My one complaint would be that I got mental whiplash when Jack just randomly wound up in cyber space and that the last two paragraphs are kind of obsolete. Okay two complaints. You get the idea.

hey, awsome story! i LOVED how the creature mauled those people!

that was cool! keep it up, cant wait for more!

all i have to say is WTF

I LIK IT SEEMS LIK JACK HAS A HEART AFTER ALL.

wow! ive never read anything like it

That was hilarious! *dies laughing* I had no idea "Server three whould be marked by Jack and go to server-hell" could bring about such a funny fic.