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| Rockin Moonbeam 2008-01-31 ch 1,  | abuseI love this story. One thing though; you might want to use a spell-check, otherwise it's great! |
| aspirer 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abusekeith richards! haha :) |
| Angie 2006-05-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseKeep updating! Keep updating! Please!! IT was very good!! |
| lady stardust 17 2005-09-19 ch 1, | abuseI love this chapter please continue with this story. |
| Gohan-Kun Shin 2005-07-05 ch 1, | abuseumm..great movie. pointless fic |
| D. Gleason 2005-03-24 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I have good news and bad news for you. First, the good news: I really enjoyed reading this and found it wonderfully descriptive. Overall, it was excellently written. Now, the bad news: Your story reads more like poetry than prose. Although there's nothing really wrong with that, it should be placed under the 'poetry' genre as well as 'general.' I also spotted a few spelling/puncuation errors--I recommend having this beta-read. |
| Johanna 2005-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseFabulous idea. Totally bought the scene...very Crowe-esque. |
| queen-narcissa 2005-01-09 ch 1, | abusehave you ever been to a concert? there are not doors under stages and security do not dole out backstage passes. penny lane does not seem the type to be at front of the stage either. maybe spell check before you submit |
| fairyfranz 2005-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story please please please keep going with it. |
| Meow 2004-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was ok. I was a bit dissappointed. You should have added a a Stone's song in there or some thing. |
| tinydancer69 2004-12-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was good!! |