Very cute! I like that you kept everyone in character ^_^

And don't worry about the "science mumbo jumbo", this show is notorious for that! It fits right in (and honestly I didn't really notice any dialog that didn't make sense). Great Job!

haha this was the first jimmy neutron fanfiction ive read. i really like it, itd be cute if it was an episode haha.

good fic. i really liked the end of it.

Very good! Everyone was very in character. Great job!

That was cute! I liked it!

I stumbled onto your site while looking for Jimmy and Cindy pictures, and read your story there.
The characters are PERFECT!! You've really nailed em!
I really hope you write more Jimmy Neutron fic.
I'd love to see your take on gang in high school or older.
Amy Napierkwoski WAYAMY27NARF

How could anyone hate it? It was brilliant!

oh i like it but i thikn it needs more.

i really like your story. no wait. i LOVE it. please continue!

Great story. You should think about getting it filmed.))

This is the first Jimmy Neutron fanfic that I have read! I loved it! I am also a huge Jimmy/Cindy fan! Please keep writing! ^_^

Wow, you've kept them pretty much all in character, especially in their speech! This is a great story! And all the science-y terms made enough sense to me. Keep on writing!

It was extreamly good for me, for 2 reasons, 1 is I always wanted to know what would happen if Jimmy & Cindy kissed (I also am a HUGE Jimmy and Cindy fan)and 2, I have an unheathy obsession with Jimmy Neutron. It was very good, but I highly doubt that Jimmy would make something that the only cure was kissing. I'd give it about a 9.8/10

Good story!, I fell of my chair laughing whith sheen´s coments!(well I always do), well keep the good work

*Dani*

If you're asking me, Carl and Sheen were not entirely in character. However, I do find the story at least acceptable from a societal point of view. I supposed for a first, it's fairly ok.