Oh wow. Just stumbled on this little piece. I see it's quite old on your writing list but I thank you nonetheless for writing. I like hte way it went and Ayeka's finishing thoughts.

Yeah maybe Tenchi isn't Yosho but hope is there. And I always loved them as a pair. No matter to what all the rest of this dear fanfiction members say. Even in the series I always saw them the most fitting. Maybe it's just me. But you know what?

Hope lingers in my mind too for I haven't seen the end of the series.

Anyway, good job.

Anisa

The Heaven matter isn't accurate, good deeds doesn't get you to heaven. But I won't get all religious so I thought it was good how Ayeka contemplated on her brother, Jurai and Ryoko. Nice job.

::cries:: THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO SAD...AND KAWAII! AHHHH... T/A 4EVER... :;Wipes her tears off:: IT WAS GOOD!

This is so sweet! I'm crying right now! Sniffle Thanx for this... I love Aeka...

I'm too lazy to sign in right now. This was a good story, even though I don't like Aeka all that much. It's been awhile since you've written anything (much like me...hehe). Hope to see something new soon! (btw, this is ryoko-chan) Great writing, as always!