Hey there! I just found this story that you wrote awhile ago. I LOVED it! You are such a good storyteller. Keep writing. You stay true to character and weave the arc without any flat spots. Very difficult to do as I get bored easy.

Thank you.

Erin.

An excellent fic. Fast-paced and with wonderful detail and character interaction.

I enjoyed your Sam, commanding, confident...and not a little cunning. We catch glimpses of her on the show, and I hope she shows up in more of your stories.

Wow, another great story! And another awesome distraction from work! Thanks again!

Been following "Heat" and just read this one. Great job!

Great story! Among the best for writing style and staying true to characterizations. :) How about a tag? Or a sequel? ;)

The use of italics was deliberate in order to convey the psychological and emotional undercurrents running through Sam's mind. As the title implies, she was on quite a "head trip". I used the italics mainly as a tool to clarify my content and Sam's inner dialogue. I did not intend them as a stumbling block.

Thanks to all of you for the critiques and support.

Awesomeness!

Sorry I can't sign in, I'm not a member of this site. I've been enjoying your story so far, your ideas about the Replicators are interesting, but I'm finally giving up because of the rampant italics abuse. When you emphasize every other sentence, it doesn't make the story better or more exciting, it just makes it less readable.

Sam is a very capable warrior. And she is also a woman with tender, loving feelings for Jack. Nice story!!

Season Nine - Sam who?
I like your Sam, in command and ready for action (and of course with Jack. Good story. Thanks

Master wall builders indeed.

Wow, CG, just... WOW. That is one of the best Sam Carter centred stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Your characterization is dead-spot-on, and I just love the powerful punch you give Carter. She's strong and determined and loyal; just exactly as she would be if this were shown on screen. And the story was utterly believable. Can't say enough good stuff about this piece. Bravo! :)

Wonderfully written Chopin Gal!! Your description of each scene was very rich in detail, I loved it! I loved how you portrayed Sam too! :)

CG, you didn't tell me it was 32 chapters long! :-) Awesome story! You rock! Got more?!?

I don't know how I missed this fic! I eventually found it, completely by accident, on the novel archive.

Anyway, good work! I loved it. I am now off to read 'Man of the hour'

Please post again soon!