Wow, only 14 reviews for 51 chapters. . .not bad. . . ^.^
When are you gonna update? I know you have the next chapter already typed up *hint hint*

This was very good! Good subtle humour and a nice plot opening up. Can't wait to see how the story unfolds...though I'll have to because it's getting late :-)

...>.> This is very long... and full of allusions to other things, which I like. I like! I'll get around to reading it all someday...

Yep, it's me.. only slightly late.. heh. Sorry.

Though I normally don't read fics like this one there's promise here. I think this is a good fic as long as you happen to like this sort of story. Your only problem is probably the grammar, but seeing as English isn't your main language I'm willing to look past that.. still, it's occasionally hard to read. On the other hand there's a lot to be read here- I'll be reading more once I have the time.
'~Skysoar'

From what I have had a chance to read its good, storyline seems strong enough although scene discription is missing in chap 2

i feel it is better in the 3rd chap for discriptions, although i am not thrilled with this Dunt-dunt-da thing seem to just be added as an after thought...

but on th whole it could be good, tidy up around the edges and check spelling and grammer ect and end it well and you could be on a winner...

nice work people :) The Doc

Oh wow, you guys certainly wrote a lot< Shannon is such a cool character> Please write more!!

I say it was cool when Zidane kicked Frodo across the room. Hehehe...hee

It'sa me. Yeah. oo; It looks to be an interesting story. Ya better keep it updated so I can read it! I want a good laugh, too. Steve. The perfect name for an evil-doer.

Well it's Adam! Your story is very well put together and very good. Coming in at 77 pages in word in 8pt font is a huge story lol and it's not done! Took a while but it's very good and hope to read more soon.

lol usually i dont like stories that make fun of my favorite characters but this is hilarious.

P.S. How do u write so much? You have like 24 really long chaps and i cant even write 10 short chaps. Ur amazin! O_O

lol i cant stop laughin at the part with pippin i think im goin die very funny

Hellow kasey and shannon. wow this is long! well ill keep reading its awsome already! keep writing!

Hey it's Vicki. I absolutely love your story. Keep it up. See you at school.

hey guys, this will take me a few months (lol kidding days) to read so when im done i'll make sure to comment :-)

I just want to say to Shannon and Kasey...that you guys are doing a wonderful job on your book... and I've read all of it... so far...*hee hee* let me know how you guys are doing...K? Talk to you guys later at school! (Merry Christmas!) **Yes shannon, I've got you're gift still!**
SNOTO no! lmfao bub bye now you guys!
Keep up the good work!