Wonderful story. I don’t know what is best: Remus’s unsent letter, the brilliant scene on the flying motorbike (so well described, the exhilaration touched by terror, and the realisation that Sirius is Remus’s home), the description of summer (was this 1976? That would be the summer between 5th and 6th year? Because that was an exceptionally long, hot summer which ended in a spectacular thunderstorm). No, I think the best is the end, the last few sentences: home, peace, safety. For now, anyway.

The writing seems to be faultless, the characterisation spot on.

Aw it so cute.

Cute and fluffy and sweet even if your timing is a bit off. Smiles. Merry Christmas.

Ahh! That was so cute! Warm fuzzies! Write more please! I love how you leave everything unsaid, leaving the reader to really read into the characters actions instead of the words they're saying! Write more please!

Hey, forgot to mention i added this to my community as well *laughs* yeah, just HAD to tell you :D

*freaks out* omg, this was THE sweetest thing i've read in a VERY long time.

Oh, it just made me melt into a puddle of happiness *in her dreams she's snuggled happily in the room with Remmy and Siri*

My favorite part of this was when Sirius was like Padfoot, it was adorable.

You are really good at descriptions too, it reminded me of summers in South Dakota

Adding you, and your story to my favs list :D

This is the most wonderful, realist fluff-fic that I've ever read! It wasn't overdone like the rest of them and your sense of detail in writing is astounding. I will be sure to check out any of your upcoming fics, so please write more!