I really enjoyed reading this. It was evocative and creepy. I love the different glimpses into what Hakkai, Goyjo, and Sanzo really wanted.

Rereading, Hakkai feeling alive and dead is wonderfully forshadow-y; I liked that line the first time because it really described what Hakkai must be feeling- the world is perfect but something is wrong.

In Goyjo's section, I love the details about the lack of scars tugging when he smiled, the dark hair in the mirror and having to practice to get his smile right. (Also, what was the symbology of it snowing all the time?)

The last line of Sanzo's section killed me dead. You described the weather and environment very well. I could just see how peaceful it must have been, and then you have Sanzo's dead master inquiring about his health... yeah.

I really liked the bits with Team Kougaiji and Goku working together. I'm a sucker for those kinds of stories, and I really liked the image of Yaone driving Jeep, it's wrong in this nice something's-not-quite-as-it should-be-way.

My one bit of concrit is that I would have liked to see the effects of coming *out* of the illusion. Even though all three of them subconsciously (and in Sanzo's case, consciously) that something was not-quite right, I still think that there would have been some kind of emotional consequences.

But I really liked them playing blackjack and sort-of ignoring Goku. It was cute and sweet and mean all at the same time.

Interesting indeed! Great plot, wonderful message, and full of surprises. I enjoyed it very much. ^_^

Wow, a captivating chapter. Just as I thought I'd be reading about Goku's nightmare next... I really like the sentence about the smile in Hakkai's face staying in his eyes too. Great writing!

That was super confusing. but I kinda got it at that end... I think. Bye!

*wails* Aww... it's over?

*grins* But... wonderful wonderful job here! I have to admit that without your footnote, I'd still be wondering what actually happened. I more or less figured out that somehow Goku's 'world' was the right one, but whoa... nothing prepared me for the complexity of this fic's plot. Excellent use of Zakuro's ability too. *applauds*

But hmm, I do believe Kougaiji-tachi know fully well that Nii and Gyokumen *are* the bad guys here. But then again, it's your call. ^^;

Well then... what else have I got to say? Ooh, and I think Goku's wanting is *just* as you said. No place he rather be than by the ikkou's side. *cheers*

Ok ok... it's getting way too long. Hope to see more excellent fics from you. Great job, dearie! *hugs*

So well done! *applauds*

"thank you for sticking with the fic," nothing! It was great! Any previous lack of reviewing wasn't because of any lack of love, but instead because I'm a lazy bastard. Heh.

And you're so right! It's all about the bond with these guys. I can't wait to see you do more with them.

*tears hair and groans out in frustration* Gah, a cliffie, my dear?? How could you!? *sobz*

As always, a wonderful read. You held my interest till the very end and now I'm just biting the ends of my hankie, awaiting the next chapter AND (hopefully) the answers as to what the heck is going on here! Great job, my dear! And thanks for the timely updates!

Brilliant. I've been reading since the first chapter, but just haven't gotten around to reviewing and I've got to say, I should have giving you kudos much, much earlier. The whole premise is facinating and the way you lay it out is very well done. This chapter in particular absolutely slayed me. I can't wait for more!

god, I. I don't know if it's the season or something but. ow. this is like one of those lightening-fast gutpunches, you don't see it coming, you don't see it leave, you don't know that it happened or even how it happened, but the pit of my stomach's falling out.

nice. I so look forward to where you're going with this!

Dang it, girl... you've got me hooked even more. And yes, I do look forward to this explanation you promised.

This is a really, beautifully written piece. I'm in awe of the way you structured your words in a way it's complicated yet understandable enough to read.

Ok, about the fic... I can easily see how Gojyo and Hakkai could give in to this supposed chance. And so like Sanzo to be analytical and practical of the situation, but in the end...

And who is that mysterious woman??

Ok, ok... I shall just wait for ch3. Keep it up, yes? You're so good *huggles tight*

And before I forget, welcome welcome!! Enjoy your stay here!! ^_^

Interesting and fascinating and the details you've put in just astounds. I'm very, very glad I was able to find this fic.

Wow. Saw this recced on wildelamassu's lj, read the first chapter and was blown away.

Then I came back to find an update. Insert fangirl joy spazzing.

This is really, really beautiful. Beautiful characterizations, beautiful images, and I *love* Sanzo's refusal to accept the dream.

Scuse while I add you to the Must Stalk list.

great write...would have been nice if it was a one shot...keep the beauty in it
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Ooh, this is really intriguing. I'm curious now as to why the three are being 'haunted' by their pasts, and so early in the morning too. And I like how you managed to maintain Goku's childlike attention to things. Very nice.

Hope to read more soon. ^_^

Wow, very strong! I'm curious as to what this story will bring. Great work!