Cool

Woah 0.0 Interesting, very good )

wow that was great. the whole

Three hours, one minute, thirty-three seconds, and six years ago

was all like donnie darko it was a really good addition

Oh my god. This story is such a realistic possiblity. It gives me the chills thinking this was the fate of Neo after Revolutions ended. I'm kinda depressed now, but man what a story! Very unique and nicely written. Very professional. This is the best fanfic I've read in a long while. Bravo! Keep up the great work!

Haunting and very sad.

How many times must I say and must other people say it? You're truly a great writer! Just find a search engine and find a damn website that allows average people to have their work published and get your work published! There are tons of people out there that haven't read your work. You can be a director and a writer at the same time.

Maybe someday, when we're fully grown, someone will pop up an ultimate Matrix fanfiction, and we try to convince the Wachowski bros. that we would like to make a new movie. And perhaps, you'll be the director and I'll just work my way somewhere in the props, as I have dreams of movie business as well.

Do something. Do not hide your great talent in just one website. Open up for the whole world to see!

(okay, that was another way of me saying that this story is good.)

And here I thought that only your Smith fic could move me to tears.

Silly me.

A deep, beautifull and spiritual work, perfectly capturing the deeper spritual themes of the trilogy, and a perfect tribute to Neo's character. This is a very very plausible fate for The One, and I found it very moving.

Once again you prove yourself as the best Matrix authour on this site.

Whoa... this is a really interesting take on what the machines would do with Neo's body/mind after Revolutions happened. While it's really interesting to read, it was also really sad. I cried a little bit on some of the parts in it. Great job though!

Whoa. That was really different. I enjoyed it...very fresh and unique. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

DM

If one shall fail, than so shall the other. It is the never ending cycle.