I love this little collection of stories or shall I call them reflections? They get to the heart of the various characters in the series. I adore them. Its short and sweet and to the point. Sometimes I want to read a pretender story, but don't want to read a long one because of time.

You captured the characters' personalities and give insights into their feelings that is beautiful. You wouldn't even have to name the person your delving into because I can usually tell right away which character is narrating. Great job! ;)

LIKED YOUR DARBBLES!

Sweet! I love it Mel! You always did have a way with Babyfic... More baby Jarod please? *sniff*

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I read them all and they where all good.

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I just read your story it was good.

Hi Melanie-Ann,

Nicely done. Very realistic look at how things began. Please continue soon.
Mercy

Hi Melanie-Anne.

This quick glances into the past of each character were very interesting and sad. Very nice job. Please continue.
Mercy

Very nice. I love them all. The last one is so very sad. I get this feel of almost a double life for Raines, as if he was keeping him semi-normal and then she dies :(

Dang. I'm feeling sorry for Raines and it's all your fault. ;)

Lovely work as always.

*offers mint chocolate chip ice cream* Thanks.

She lets him touch her!?!
Uh oh... are we goning to have Pretender:The Next Generation? *snicker*

Aww. There is a typo in the second portion... when Catherine smiles her "thanks".
As always, more more more, please!

Ah, Poor Tommy. *wipes eyes* That was so sad, when he pictured her pregnant with his child... and then you remember how his story arc ended in the show. Very well done Mel!

*nods* You know, she did it to me too. I think Sezzie's on a mission to spread MP/L across the fandom. *chuckles*

Hi Melanie-Anne.

Interesting side of Lyle. Loving and protecting someone from his past, before he was changed and damaged.
Please continue.
Mercy

Hi Melanie-Anne,

Love all the little drabbles. You did a great job going into the minds of each character. Hope that you continue.
Nicely done.
Mercy