Heh... nice, I liked it. Good job! ^^

I like the story and how you ended it. It leaves us to our sorely neglected imaginations.
-Kate

Good times, this was a welcome diversion to the drudgery of the real world.

I liked it. Kinda reminded me of a manga called B-Shock. One of the few things that bugged me, appart from the occasional grammatical error, was the rope around the wrists instead of the top part of their arm or something. One of them could have stepped away from the other and pulled their arms more than three feet away for example. Another thing is your idea of two feet of rope, some of the things you describe them doing would take a lot more than two feet of rope such as standing two and a half feet appart with some of the rope "sprawled on the floor" and the thing with Monkey Fist and the van. Still, it was well written and i love your work.

I for one liked the "open" ending. Don't mistake me, I LOVE KiGo -Shego is positively divine. I did agree with your pacing; one event wasn't going to radically change both women, like switching the polarity of a magnet. Instead, you showed us the power of what one event to could do and the ramifications it would have on the development and mutation of their relationship.

It's at this point that I usually pout out, "but I wanted to read more..." This can't be helped. You write very well, write very good KiGo, and I'm selfish (and not ashamed to say it ;-)

Two Questions: 1) Were you trying to hint at an inevitable Betty/Vivian relationship/romance in The Unacceptable Sitch series? Personally, I love Bet/Viv! I also love Unacc. Sitch. Their moments were always so meaningful and precious, and with Tommy's "hints" about the future, I took this to mean they would be getting together. Yeah, them. (And Us -Betty and Barkin went over as well as Miss Go and Barkin: Not at All).

2) Anymore KiGo in the future? I don't believe I'm alone in liking to see more of what you've got locked away in your imagination. Speaking for myself, I'd love to see how Betty and Vivian Porter finally got together after Under the Milkyway (The Church Rock!). Or more KiGo. I never tire of THAT goodness.

In closing, well done! I really enjoyed this.

Love it!

I really like story so far. Very interesting.

Ron is hilarious this chapter!

I gotta say, I love your characterizations of Kim and Shego.

oh this is absolutely hilarious!

Thanks for the enjoyable read. Even if it is not full blown Kigo, it is still fun to read some of the subtle innuendo and Shego being Shego in her comments.

I like it one problem if Shego lives on the island why is there no actual place to live.

That was a great story!
I like the idea, and the execution of it was brilliant!
I hope you continue it!
And, as a reader of US, I'm glad to say, this is as good as it's Kigoriffic counterpart. I'm gonna watch Sitch in Time on YouTube before I read "But For The Grace Of Ron," though. Great fic, and I can't wait! :D

I really enjoyed this one, Ron's line about spending time with him also at the end of the first chapter just about knocked me off my seat. I'm glad you finished this and I think the place you ended is perfect.

Alex.

great story, i enjoyed it much.

Yay! asome! Thank you for not make it a kigo those are kind of weird... Write more! (I'm more of a ronshego fan)^_^