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Reviews For: Loves' Trials

Brittany 2006-12-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseI was hoping to read some more Green Rider...but I guess I'll just have to wait for the third book since your "writer's block" -ahem- is evil. ^^
lambentness 2006-08-19 ch 1,	abuseyou must update! please! please! please!
Lea 2006-07-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseI agree with the two first reviewers. The actual content is wonderful, I just think it should be in a different format. The italic and the main jumps in PoV is very distracting. Otherwise, I'm seriously waiting for an update (a two year writer's block?) Purlezz.
Mystical-Maiden 2006-03-24 ch 1,	abuseI've just finished reading Green Rider and First Riders Call and i'll admit it had me in tears of frustrtion at the end. I kept yelling in my head "happily ever after DAMNIT!" laughs I suppose that is why i liked this so much... you are giving me a chance for that happily ever after. I like the way you are allowing each character to show their inner feelings and thoughts even as they go through their usual daily routines. Sorry to say that i don't really have much to say... as i don't make a judgement of a fic based on the first chapter... but so far it is looking good and i look forward to reading more soon. ~Myst.
aerinoutlander 2006-03-22 ch 1,	abusethat must be one hell of a writers block to last to years... so... update already! it is good if you people just update!
wolfsbabe midnight 2005-12-29 ch 1,	abuseI really hope you keep writting this story. I'm enjoying it so far... it looks like it's been a long while since you last updated...
Lalinalyn 2005-06-22 ch 1, anon.	abusePleaseohpleaseohpleaseohplease update this story! It's EXACTLY what I wanted to happen after the end of FRC, and i NEED to see how it ends! I wish so much that Karigan and Zachary had ended on a better note, and you write it exactly how I imagined it! If you don't continue this, I might just keel over and die. honestly. you MUST continue. you must. It's wonderfull! I love it! Your writing seems just like the book! it's like the forgotten chapter! :) PLEASE update as soon as possible! PLEASE! Your eagerly awaiting fan, who's currently in danger of death from excitedness, -KATE
Spellcaster Hikaru 2005-04-17 ch 1,	abusesniffle I wan't to read more!! You must update this story!! O_O Or..or..I'll sick my Wepons on you and they will poke you with their swords till you write!! >_< Please update!!
Midnight Lady 2005-04-04 ch 1,	abusewhoo hoo! yay for green rider! i hadn't realized there were any green rider stories on here. freaking awesome!
Darkness Echo 2005-01-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseLoves it loves it loves it! I like the way you really get into thier thoughts. Pleas write more! I'm begging!
Asia-chan 2005-01-24 ch 1,	abuseI like this very much. Please continue, you're off to a very nice start.
Ms Urania 2005-01-03 ch 1,	abuseI think that you need to use the characters' thoughts less, as all the italics can become distracting and interrupt the flow of your story. Maybe if you try and work their thoughts, feelings. etc into the narrative more it would sound better. Having said that I really enjoyed this and like how you took us into all the differnet characters heads. Please post another chapter soon.
FondyCheesehead 2004-12-21 ch 1,	abuseWell, you have me intrigued about this letter. I'm loking forward to seeing how this develops. Constructive Criticism: be careful when using writing yur characters' thoughts. I like the idea, but there's a little too much of it in this chapter. Cheers Jen
ancient-memories 2004-12-20 ch 1,	abuseI like this story alot. It is very well written and I cant wait until the next chapter :) The only character I didn't see that I think would fit into the plot nicely was Fastion, but maybe he'll show up later, or so I hope cause he's cool :)

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