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| pal411 2008-01-14 ch 26,  | abuseAmazing story! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to review. This is definitely one of my favourite Charmed fanfiction stories. I'm still not sure how you wrapped your head around all the time paradoxes and managed to make it cohesive-great job! |
| wiccanforever 2006-08-24 ch 26, | abuseLoved it! |
| cdfe88 2006-06-12 ch 26, | abuseOOps...I reviewed chapter 15 because I thought that was the last chapter, but it turned out the paradox resolved very well. It must have been very confusing trying to sort a double time-line paradox wasn't it. Well good story, and BTW could you review mine it's called "Is this what I became?" thnx |
| cdfe88 2006-06-12 ch 15, | abuseRESOLVE! RESOLVE SEQUEL! GOOD FIC! Although the time paradox was worst than any evil cliffie in the world because we know how it will turn out...it's very confusing. |
| Inversnaid 2006-06-05 ch 26, | abuseWow! Amazing story, I have really enjoyed reading it. I love the concept behind it and you done ever so well with all the characterisations. I hope you write more fic, especially if it's going to be about Chris and Wyatt. Brilliant, well done. |
| Stoneage Woman 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseHey, this is a great start! Will be continuing this. |
| Acacia Jules 2005-05-04 ch 4, | abuseBianca wasn't a demon! She was a PHEONIX. She was MURDERED by Wyatt. And you undermine their whole relationship, for your whimpy self-created character. |
| phoebe_x15 2005-04-07 ch 26, anon. | abuseI loved this story. I think you're an amazing writer. It's really impressive that you didn't get confused with this time loop. Great work! |
| s2p106 2005-03-28 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou have some great ideas about mixing the show and your stories together. I think you have a great talent for writing stories. The way you explained things is much better than the way they did it on the show. |
| Stony Angel 2005-02-12 ch 26, | abuseWow! It took me two days but I read everything and I have to say this is amazing! A great great work. And I'm glad you didn't stop with the time loop begining again. You know I love Chris too much to be stuck with the feeling that he is destined to make the same mistakes. You did a real amazing job! Congratulations. TWoPer just like you Vdo Queen ;-) |
| annabel-lee1 2005-02-03 ch 26, | abuseYay, thank you so much for resolving the paradox! Lovely ending. How sweet that Chris wants to save whatever needs saving...Great story. I hope you'll write more. |
| PUBGIRL 2005-02-03 ch 26, anon. | abuseFantastic story with a happy ending. Great clarification on the Chris storyline. Are you sure you aren't a scriptwriter? You have heaps of talent! |
| Nathy1000000 2005-02-02 ch 27, anon. | abuseGreat! You solved those time loops in a great way. I loved this part. It was sad that Leo let Chris died But yes, there was a possiblity the avatars would have gone after Chris. Great, great story and excelently thought! |
| Shanta 2005-02-02 ch 25, anon. | abuseGreat story. I really enjoyed it. I thought it was very clever how you solved the time travel paradox. |
| Esbee 2005-02-02 ch 26, | abuseAwesome ending! Good work! |