 Maelie 2009-09-09 . chapter 1Your stories seem to have such a warm, earthy and wise quality to them. I'm glad you posted something else recently - I've only just discovered you too :) |
 SashaS. 2008-10-16 . chapter 1Wash before bath? I learned something new today!
Anywho, Chouji/Shika has always been a bit of a "eh, convince me." pairing for me. Perhaps 'cause I used to be a bit of a die-hard Shika/Temari shipper until I got into slash.
But boy, you convinced me. I though I wouldn't be convinced, but towards the end...oh you got me! I'll have to read a few other similar fics to really settle into this ship, but I'm on it, and the view is wonderful. ^^
I particularily like the part were you mentioned Shika getting worried over Chouji getting thin. I could picture it, and it's so sweet.
This has been a review from your crazy-wandering stalker reviewer. :D
~Sasha |
 Chromde 2008-03-13 . chapter 1This was so sweet, I really loved how you portrayed the two. Especially when Shika couldn't stop his thoughts from running rampant.
... and now I know. I had NO idea about that bath thing before. It's pretty cool.:3 |
 Toki Mirage 2007-03-08 . chapter 1aw... so cute! I've been so lucky to run into all these uber cute one-shots lately! ^^ |
 nwfairy 2007-01-16 . chapter 1Gah^^ That is so good^^ I love it ^^
I just wish there was more choshika out there T_T |
 Vampire Queen 2006-06-11 . chapter 1WE! More goodness! I is happy that I found more of Mr.Story! *runs around happily* |
 Luna 2005-03-02 . chapter 1 Please write something like that for Neji and Naruto, Heh, I love this story! and The Risk too! |
 Fairady 2005-02-25 . chapter 1i love this fic. i almost skipped over these, bad me. that's about as coherent as i can get about it. thanks so much for posting it. |
 kimi no vanilla 2005-02-16 . chapter 1Though I'm not a fan of this pairing, I thought this was extraordinarily well-written. A very-interesting take on Shikamaru and his psychology, and Chouji as caretaker was simply adorable. |
 ghostninja85 2004-12-21 . chapter 1Well, this was an unexpected pair. It was still pretty good though.
I'm looking forward to your future work. |