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Reviews for: Awakening
icedragonchilde
2007-05-30 . chapter 1
O_O. . .*wobbly lip* *eyes fill with tears* NNYYAUGH! That was so, SO depressing!! *collapses into a sobbing heap* Augghh! Too beautiful. . .so sad. . .so bittersweet. . .guwa!!

Oh, oh that was heartbreakingly lovely. I have to go and stare blankly at a wall for a while as my emotions settle down. . .

("Lord Yggy’s." teehee)
bright snow
2006-08-25 . chapter 1
Heh. I finally managed to overcome my laziness of not signing in. Feel lucky and honored by my show of strength. :P

Right. Whatever. -Rolls eyes- :)

As are all of your stories... I loved this one. Especially since I actually know how the songs you picked for this story go (I have the CD
firedragongirl
2006-06-15 . chapter 1
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! OMG! THIS IS SO GOOD!!
nife
2006-05-13 . chapter 1
Awesome! This is totally awesome!! I loved it, it was so well in character
Story Weaver1
2006-02-27 . chapter 1
Great Job, Zelos is very IC I think. The part with Kratos and Zelos was especially good. I liked the Shenlos too
FlameRaven
2005-02-12 . chapter 1
Have I mentioned how much I love this fic? Because I do. I read it again and again and again...this fic made me like Zelos, where before he was just kind of there. It also made me like Zelos/Sheena.

And I still laugh every time I hear the phrase "Lord Yggy."

Excellent work. =)
Crimson315
2005-01-16 . chapter 1
Oh, I likes! This is a really great story! Is this a one-shot? It would be great either way. You're such an awesome writer. Your fight scenes are amazing, and the way you write is so smooth and fun to read. I still haven't actually finished the game, but oh well. I didn't think to actually look for stories related to it until a few minutes ago. Your story is the first TOS fanfic I've read, and I sure wasn't disappointed! Great job! Keep at it!
the-key-of-the-twilight
2004-12-22 . chapter 1
very beautiful... is this supposed to be Sheelos? It seems like it. Anyways, this is very well written. It seems you spent a lot of heart of this. Very well done. Descriptions are fine and the sentences flow smoothly. YAY!! You go on my favorite stories list!

Huh? Kratos needs to go to Niflheim? At the end of the game, doesn't he go to Derris-Kharlan to rid of all the exspheres? Well, this is your fanfiction so I shouldn't be saying anything.^_^ However, it is interesting how you made Kratos and Zelos refer to each other by their last names.

You're pretty good at describing battles. Every time I do it, it sounds really weird. You describe what's happening and yet you add in detail within every attack. Very impressive. Plus, I just LOVE the fact how you have BOTH Kratos and Zelos. The ending is very sad, but it was a good one. Anyways, I'm talking too much amn't I? Well, great job on this fine piece of work and write more! Happy Holidays everyone!! ~the key of the twilight
Mother Lotus
2004-12-22 . chapter 1
*gasp* That was an incredible fanfic. Just.. Wow. Oh so deep! I liked how you kept things tragic but so tragic that the reader couldn't handle it.

Woah. Please add on or write something else like it!
Trickssi
2004-12-21 . chapter 1
::tear:: Can't tell you how much I love that song... So you're a Wicked fan, too, eh? I saw that in NYC in October, and I think Idina's amazing... ::drools::

ANYWAY! Back to *your* story, I thought it was terrifically well-written... and hell, if I didn't know better, I thought it might be my own. I was actually going to write a one-shot just like this, and in my second-last chapter I was going to use "For Good" as a sort of preface. Agh! Get out of my brain! ^.~ So, this was a wonderful little respite from my own depressing story, and I'm glad I took the time to read it. Write more, please!
Ari and Mo
2004-12-21 . chapter 1
Wow...That was...perfect. Nothing else could describe this. If this is a one-shot, I would be overjoyed at a continuation/sequal.
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