Just fantastic!

this is a wonderful story! I also wondered about that a LOT. HUMPH, some people are really lucky, are not they?

Wow. You have a great way of getting inside Raito's head, and all done in an enjoyable way - the first sentence was BRILLIANT (hehe), and I love how it finished. So in-character.

Yes yes! The spoon is the star of this story! Faves! J/k, its the thumb...

Thank you for that. I really needed a good laugh right about now. Brilliant :)

Hahaha, it's so true. L seems so primitive yet we all know he's brilliant.

LOVED it. There's something so...delightfully quirky about it. The way you wrote Light is brilliant.

The way you can get inside a character's head is astounding, and you never fail to produce top quality narrations. Great job.

Hi. I read this once before, but that was before I got an account. I felt like reading this again, and found it hilarious. "In the meantime, Raito stares, and seethes at evolution." I just loved that line. And L, for his obliviousness of Light's inner rage. And a koala. And HA! when Light bites his thumb like L. So priceless. But for some reason, I can't seem to follow the very end. ARG! (Bangs head on the desk) I hate that. Where is the thumb print again? What the heck happened? Wonderfull fic, BTW.

Brilliant.

Nicely worded! I enjoyed the simmering frustration that was evident in Raito's descriptions, and I think you managed to convey a lot. Well-written, and an entertaining read.

wow...you've got this down perfectly! the first sentance got me laughing and from there...ah. Brilliant job.

Yes.

And, I believe...YES.

You + Words = Maximum Happiness.

Yep.

L is...very difficult to write. I say that not just from personal experience with the Adorable Panda Bastard, but also from having read him a great many times in Fic-Verse...he is very often portrayed quite poorly, if the author attempts to keep him within the bounds of his character at all, but you manage to pull him across with superlative flair --and this through Raito's (sociopathic, scheming, EVIL) perspective, even.

And Raito's introspection, his speculation --hilarious, on point, very, very enjoyable.

Thank you.

THANK you, damn it.

Freaking catapults.

I am impressed.

That is all.

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I loved this -- wonderful job.

^_^ I love the end. I always tried to remember the word for that wierd curvy-like smile L has, and there you say it, goofy. So true! I have to fave this, its so cute. I like the way you pointed out the fact that L almost always has something in his mouth. ^^_