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Reviews for: Paradise
Cheeky-eyes
2006-01-22 . chapter 1
oh, gr8 fic! worth countiueing! :D
Kailyssia
2005-11-11 . chapter 1
I really like it so far. It is interesting and descriptive. Very nicely written. It is an interesting idea and I want to know more. What happened? Why was Yugi killed? How was he killed? Why didn't Atemu save him? Why did they go into hiding? Why come back? And why didn't Atemu tell Yugi that he loved him? Whats going to happen? Trust me when I tell you that not finishing a story just because it doesn't get a lot of reviews is a bad thing to do. Eventually your going to want to finish this fic and won't remember what you were planning and it won't be as good as it would have been if you hadn't finished it when you started writing it. I speak from experience. This is a good fic no matter what anyone says and I and many others will want to find out what happens, I'm sure even you want to know what happens and it is your story. I hope you find a muse and finish this great fic. Please update soon. Happy writing.
blairwitch
2005-08-01 . chapter 1
This is really good! Please update I really want to know if Yugi is on the other side of the door.
mjus
2005-05-21 . chapter 1
I, like everyone else, want this to continue. In the beginning you wrote the town were filed with souls, so why won't Yugi be one of those? There may be a way for him to return to the world of living ^_^
Uptade ASAP please
Mjus
Anime Gal4
2005-03-18 . chapter 1
Hm...interesting...

AnimeGal4
Kari-Sama
2005-02-10 . chapter 1
Wha, Yuugi-kun is dead? But at least Atemu did not forget him!
Yami-Yugi3
2005-01-06 . chapter 1
More please. ^__^
Nemo Sushi
2005-01-04 . chapter 1
CONTINUE!
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i luv yami and yugi
2005-01-02 . chapter 1
o i think this is worth continuing! ^.^ n maybe a happy ending? *shrugs* anyway, update soon!
Reshin
2004-12-25 . chapter 1
This is cool!
dontmesswithYami
2004-12-23 . chapter 1
yes keep it up please! i almost as eager as Atemu to open the door. so please contuine! i love it! update asap!
Yami Yuugi
2004-12-21 . chapter 1
this is one interesting fic, i like it, makes me really interested. WHy was Yugi killed? and who did it? oh well i liked this and will be keeping up with it. update again soon
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