I think that this is something of a unique idea. Very few people decide to cover the Sohmas' when they were younger, even though the backstory sets up some really interesting scenerios. Finding someone who is covering Kyou's past is really good, especially since you've chosen to go with his meeting some of the other characters for the first time. This story has a lot of potential and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with it.

I also run Neko Ino, which is a Kyou and Kagura fanworks site. I look for fics that not only have that pairing, but also offer any insight to those two, together or apart. I think that this fic would be a nice addition, tackling as it does Kyou's past. If you could consider allowing me to host this there, I'd be thrilled. You can find my email address and a link to the site in my bio. Keep up the good work!

It's a really nice fanfic.