Um... his mom didn't beat him, his stepmom did. Just thought you might wanna know.

_melissa

*claps hands* these were amazing as a collection! and:

'"Fire, blood and passion

Those lustful eyes, cast to one

Who attempt blindness"

the above is one my favourite though. the next a close second.

"Eyes and hair of blood

Her taboo child she beats, yet

The blame is her own"

awesome! i love gojyo. sorry can't help it really!

much love -zan

I liked this

You can tell immediately which is which

okay, i didn't really understand your fic, but it made for an interesting read. i need more of your fics!

i like where these are going so far. Nice work! .

Yea! Nice job! I liked Goku's the best!

wow, very nice, keep up the nice work! _

-WOOT-! Nice chappie! Some people spell it nyou-bou, I do.

I can never write haiku's...*huggles back* Thanks for metioning me!

Nice! Keep writing!

This second "chapter" is by far my favorite of the three, with the strongest being Sanzo's piece.

And yes, poetry is /just/ as worthy of reviews (if not more so, but...look who you're talking to ).

Hee Hee! So funny! Thanx for reviewing my fic, there's also a new chappie!

very nice...very nice indeed

T

I particularly liked the fourth-that's a trademark of haiku, the unexpected drop of the third line.

O.O Whoa...better that anything I've written...