 pink-kiss-candy 3/11/06 . chapter 4Please update soon. I love this story!. |
 SyberiaWinx 9/22/05 . chapter 4 I like it so far, but I have to ask...Is this going to be a NamixGustafa fic? I've been looking for one forever! Either way, keep writing! |
 Celia 8/4/05 . chapter 4 I love that!But i respect celia too so dont make her look evil!(i also like nami too just to get the facts straight) |
 Living in a fantasy 3/15/05 . chapter 4You write with a lot of good detail. You are going to continue it? I hope so, it's really good. I was surprised by the way Jack acted, but you DO do a good job. Please continue, there's not many Harvest Moon fics out there that I put on my favorites list. |
 DrippingInk 1/20/05 . chapter 4You've read "Flipped"? You're kidding me! o_O
I just finished reading that book and it's just... I don't know what to say! It's just such an amazing book! What was YOUR favourite part of the book? :P
Oh, and on the reviewing note, this is impressive. You've really out-done yourself. In the words of... well, DrippingInk: "Update! NOW! You hear me?"
-DI |
 F.S.O 1/16/05 . chapter 4Oh! This is cool! Nice story! |
 YukiVampyra 1/9/05 . chapter 4I LOVE UR STORY! It's awesome! I personally paired 'Jack' with Nami dude it's worth the wait trust me! Anyway update soon! |
 hieilover2005 1/6/05 . chapter 4very good update when u can |
 Starlight-Illusion 1/5/05 . chapter 4Fantastic! Another great chappie my fellow flutist! OOh, I love the writing format you chose, very original. Not the everyday Jack did this, Jill did that. I also like that you did it in Nami's P.O.V., not the usual Jack or soon-to-be wife thing. |
 BorderWolf 1/3/05 . chapter 4Nice how Nami, wanted to get revenge, but since she still cares for Jack, that she doesn't want to go through with it. Hope the writer's block doesn't stay for long. |
 deeper 1/3/05 . chapter 3 wow... this is very good! i feel sorry for nami there.
its a good story, yep, yep! |
 Tragedy Catalyst 1/3/05 . chapter 3This is a really cool story. But perhaps you could make the chapters a bit longer. I don't know. It's still a cool story though. |
 Krazie4Christ 12/30/04 . chapter 3Good! Really good. I only wish you'd have continued, made the chapter longer, included the actual doing of everything she said she was going to do in the last paragraph.
Nevertheless, you've got my attention and left me waiting anxiously for the next update! |
 Khdude 12/30/04 . chapter 3 'Now I would get back at Jack for making the last
five years of my life hell and steal him away from
the girl who had seduced him into a lying puddle.'
Uh-oh. Celia is in trouble...
Oh yeah. Good fic so far!:D |
 572011 12/29/04 . chapter 3This is a great story. I've always been rather fond of Nami, so it's nice to see a story from her point of view. While scanning through the list of Harvest Moon fics, I saw one that the author described as, "Rather popular. I highly reccommend it" Your story is much better than hers. That's a random note, but I thought maybe you'd like to know. |