I have to say, this is the most powerful, original, and realistic of the Marcus revival stories I've read so far! Very creative & moving. I'm amazed & very grateful. Thank you!

I really enjoyed that. It was great seeing Ivonova take charge again. I was a bit wary about Marie at first, but I came to like her a lot. I loved seeing Ivonova with her 'grandchildren.' Thanks for sharing!

Oh my god! That was so good! There were a few grammar things here and there, but it was really good! A bit intense, but in a good way! I'd never thought of the story quite like this. I started crying when she she said that she thought she'd killed him, and didn't stop until about now. WOW, that was just...wow! I can't wait to read more, this was fabulous! I'm completely stunned!

~Kai

oh my gosh!! That was good! there were only two grammatical things I caught, but this is a good concept...and your introduction part may have spawned the end of another story I was working on. The begining bit did seem very repetitious, and rather like a summary of the seasons, but youbrough enough good insight into it that it was worth reading! I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next!

~Kai =^_^=

For as much fun that you've had writing this, I think I've had just as much reading it. It took me two hours to do, but I read it in one sitting. And, besides a few minor grammatical errors and a couple of plotholes, like I said before, it was well-done.
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Please do make a sequel! I must admit I hate using my imagination, it's not as easy for me as it was when I was young(er). If you could pull it off, I think writing about the struggles Susan and Marcus have in patching up their relationship might be kind of neat. I know *I* could never manage it, I never was good at serious fanfiction. ;)
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I really did appreciate the fact that Marie was a Christian, not just because I am, but because it highlights my belief that people don't have to agree to love each-other and show compassion. That is probably, in my opinion, one of the strong points of Christianity: somehow, it seems to give us the strength to look past racial, religious, and ethical positions of people, and just...love them.
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But I'm ranting. Sorry.

You know, I don't think you need to worry about my agents coming after you. Why? A few points:
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+Good grammar
+realistic characterizing
+following canon, and having logical excuses when you don't
+Not making Susan into an annoying, sobbing twit
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Now, I didn't even read this, yet. I skimmed it. But it was enough to furnish me with the above arguments, and make me want to sit down and actually spend time reading it.
So, yes. I am quite glad you reviewed, as there aren't many good M/I stories here. Or even many good stories that deal with B5, period. This is, well, an exception. And, from what I saw, it was thought-out and a work that actually took time.
~Agent Amandalynn

You have great story-telling capacity and you handle your ideas so nicely without abusing the characters (especially Susan, who I happen to love eternally; what can I say? "All love is unrequited"...sorry, diverted.) I'm so looking forward to reading the rest of your story and people usually can't entice me to read sequels so thank you.

I've always been a big fan of Marcus/Susan. Loved the stories and am looking forward to the sequel.

Re title ideas:
Rebirth of Love
Remembering Love
Remember Love
and my fave: Return to Love (could mean his return to life to be loved by his family, including Susan OR his return to loving Marie and Susan OR Susan's return to loving and being loved by Marcus. Any of this make sense?)

Great to see this part of the story completed, it's a wonderful story. And a very clever way to bring Marcus back to the land of the living (I'm assuming you will... how can you not? Don't keep us in suspense too long!)

I've been an avid read of fanfic (particularly I/M pairings) for a while but this is the first time I've felt compelled to respond. Please please please don't leave us hanging! This is *almost* as bad as leaving Marcus in a cyro-tube at the end of the series!! ;-)

As for other Re titles the words that I can think of are Remember, Recognize, Restore, Rejoice or Relive.

wow! i'm flabberghasted! definately brilliantly original.
titles eh? rebirth. return. reinstated. renew . restored. rebel with a cause
can't wait for the sequel

This is a great story, but you left me hanging. Please fininsh, maybe with Marcus and Susan getting together. And, please tell me when you have the rest up, i don't check that often.

great fic, we need a sequal

Don't stop now! I'm addicted. I wish I were a writer, because all I can think to say is "wow".

Wow. Excellent.