hey updates soon

That was a really great story!

That song gives me chills, it always has. Great one.

So sad. *sniff*

Sorry I didn't review right away. I wanted to take the time to read it from beginning to end. I was so focused on their being and abortion, that I lost sight of what this was about. What an amazing fic, from beginning to end. Beautiful and poignant. You have a real knack for incorporating scenes from the show, but poetically bringing out the emotions behind the actions.

I also love the way you tie it into existing songs. I keep looking for the songs and falling in love with them...The scene where Seth and Ryan are packing to Europe was just hilarious. I loved how they were so dependant on their mom. It seemed like Ryan was finally comfortable being part of their family. Even though he wouldn't let Kirsten ask about his underpants. But he let her hug him in the airport. And he let her finish with her advice... Write another soon.

That was a great ending! I really enjoyed this story :)

HEY! that was really good! I can't believe its already done. Plz make a new story soon!

luv ya

ally

Enjoyed this a lot!

This is great! I'm really enjoying it so far. I love the way you pick up so many little details from the show itself, the little characteristics of each person - your eye for detail is amazing! I can't wait to read more :)

Excellent job! Even got a -little- tear out of me.

Merry Chrismukkah.

There were so many sweet and tender moments in this chapter... How Dawn pulls Ryan towards her, teasing him into not being scared, though you drop enough hints about her obvious drinking problems. I loved talktative, excited Seth. It's so easy to picture him as a little boy. And finally, the way you described that "last" dinner that Ryan was supposed to have with the Cohens. You nailed the description. I could see the scene in my head all over again. You were able to convey all the feelings on paper. Great job. Looking for more. (And I didn't mean to start any trouble about the timeline...)

That was fantastic. Can't wait to find out more about Kirsten's situation. Please post more soon.

HEY! Love this story! Plz continue soon! You rock!

luv ya

ally

Very sweet.

Thanks!

Your stories are never anything short of exceptional, I cant wait to see how this turns out.

Interesting... I mean that a lot nicer than it sounds. I love stories that allow the reader to fill in the blanks so to speak, and become involved in the story in the way of "hm, how should it end?" I'm rambling, I haven't had nearly enough coffee yet, but I wanted to let you know I adore your stories. Nice twist that it took having Ryan in their house for Kirsten to realize her own shortcomings as a mother to Seth... Again, well done!