I thought the story was good. But at the begining you made them roll their eyes a lot. and I wasn't really over whelmed with vivian frawley and william vance but I LOVED the story line!

Your story's a little too much like some of the other episodes. I'm not sure if I like the Vivian Frawley name off of the actor's real names but you might could find a real dancers name.

i loved this story! It was well written and wasn't to long or to short. i really like it!

UPDATE SOON! :)

LOL! I love the inside joke with the names.

IMO, this would have made a good episode.

Guess who?

Yo Great One-shot!

If your other work is as good as this then why should I bother!

This is a fantastic piece of work!

Keep it up!

Yay! Lucy finally got in the show.

I like how Lucy finally got her break in acting! Good story!

LOL! that was REALLY good!

hey!

i love this!

you really caught each and everyone of the charries...i was really into it. Actually picturing it in my head...good job!

Stephan

SoraNAnimeFan1013

Ironic how mixed up the names of William Frawlet and Vivian Vance...I liked the whole story put together! How could we forget Ricky's way of talking: You've got some 'splanin to do! Love that

peach_fan14

Your story was okay. I didn't like the names (played off of the actors) for example: William Vance as in William Frawley and Vivian Vance? As well as another Vivian Frawley just vice versa. Oh and you spell Vivian with an e, that was wrong. But maybe you could write a better one with more of a plot.

What a great, sweet story! I can really picture Lucy, Ethel, and Ricky saying all of this. Great job!