awesome! hurry up and add more chapters :p

I REALLY love this story! Its my favorite one on FanFiction! I like the idea that instead of humor, you put a little depression and romance (sexual side) into the characters. Please, PLEASE write more! You are AWESOME!

Yes, you're right, the fanfiction doesn't fit with the theme of ELR, and I'm glad you got that. That's why the put fiction in fanfiction :D

Um...this doesn't really stick with the theme of ELR in that Deb didn't start dating Ray until she had moved out of her parents house...and Deb is not like that so she would never do something like that as she was really close to her parents.

this story sucked.

wow, that was amazing... write more

I love this story! Please write more...