Extremely good, just a tad confuzing. It was Max and Maria, was it not? Oh boy...

Very good dialouge, but I'm confused of who it is between michael and maria or max and maria. Good writting style.

Babe, I liked it. I really do just like your other stories. I think you should make a sequel or something. You had me confused at first because I thought it was Michael and Maria at first then I figured out that it was Max and Maria. I am a true Ground Zero and Girlfriend at heart.

i'm really confused...

Didn't like it its the same as all the other stuff you write!

Olease do something original I don't mean to be bad it's just you were one of the best authors of fanfic I have ever seen and now everything you write just seems to be the same.