I'm pretty sure her name was Zorin, not Joleen.

*glomps* nice.

I noticed a couple grammatical things here and there, but hey. This site slightly sucketh when uploading stuff. It will eat your words...

Pip is as IC as I've EVER seen...yadda yadda yadda.

*wanders off grumbling about the lackage of plotbunnies at my house.*

im not much of a p/s fan, but i really really liked it

good job

*snicker* I can't stop laughing about the image of Seras staring to Integral's chest and exclaiming that Pip made her do it.

That is so much how I envision Pip's take on his new form of immortality. I liked the characterization.

"Funny, since the first time I saw her, I wanted to get inside of her – but not like this." Either you and I are similarly warped or it's just inevitable that Pip would think this.