My god that was great. XD i love how raven and red x interact. Do more soon please.

Wow. This is some good stuff! Red X's personality is right on, as is Raven's. I love the cat-and-mouse and the banter between the two. Slade is a perfect mix of obsessive, slick, and creepy... so you portrayed him nicely, as well. Keep up the good work- I hope to see another chappie up soon!

Drae

no suggestions, you pretty much have everything you need for a good story:) love that chapter! it was awesome:)

Critiques? yeah right. This is the best Red X story I have ever read.

great chapter. i luv x's personality. how did Rae find out x's secret idenity? update soon!

X is fully healed and ready for another round, though it looks like Slade is one step ahead of him. Love your work so please keep on updating.

Continue! Please!

You have a way of keeping your readers hanging on every word! So I was glad that you decided to go on with the Red X and Raven part because I just had to know what would happen next.

As for the romance thing, I suggest that you just go on with the story the way it is and if some slips in, good for us. If not... oh well I'm sure we'll live.

Kadesh

BTW, that was a very original name for X and I like it!

Gah! You took long enough! :thwaps: I've checked this fanfic every single day. But oh well, you made up for it with a good chapter. But update sooner next time! I was kind of anticipating X confronting Robin and the crew when Raven brought him in, but this is just as well. And yay! No sappy romance! I love you! Wel, not like that, but you know what I mean.

nice chappie. thank u 4 the update. do u watch gilmore girls did you see that one ...blah blahb alhb

Awesome, I can't wait till later chapters. Slade seems to find/ cause a weakness in all of them. The only one i can't se being afraid of him is raven ( i mean how can you get cool collected raven to panic?) Heh love whats going on between Raven and X. It seems to work out. Can't wait untill you update so do it soon.

Awesome. I lik the way your writting it, serious but at the same time it's a great skill, anyway, loved the chapter heh poor X being stocked and i swear X is that goth kid in the Sisters eppisode.

God I love this! I love the smart remarks you had Red X and Raven make,it made me laugh So hard!

slade cant kill aqualad! i thought he needed his voice! wait a minute...wen he said he needed his voice...did he mean that he needed him to scream? now thats jsut sick.

personally, if it were me in aqualad's shoes, i wouldnt have given him the chance to threaten the dolphins. i wouldve jumped off that cliff(or wtvr he was standing on) as soon as i relized who he was. i mean this guy is supposed to b dead right? then y the hell is standing in front of me? can u say psychotic zombie-man-thing-er feak? wtvr! jsut kno that i wouldve gotten my ass the hell outta there a long time ago!

btw, x is SO funny! i luv how witty he is. that conversation he had w/ raven was pretty entertaining. update soon!

helo when are you going to update I need to read something