 Chibi-Chipmunk on Crack 2007-12-22 . chapter 2This is a great fic, i can't wait till you update. I really liked the Heavyarms scenes, anways, later |
 Ariliana 2007-11-09 . chapter 2 This is wonderful, engaging and well written. I hope you continue writing this. |
 nekobotan 2007-10-01 . chapter 2Oh. Very, very nice. Very well-written and thought provoking. I love the characterization; it's very real, very personal. :3 You've got a lovely, creative story. ^^ I enjoyed reading it. Thanks~ |
 Eria 2007-09-24 . chapter 2And so Trowa appears. I really like this AU-ality. Normally I staunchly avoid AUs like the plague, but I decided to give it a try and wasn't disappointed. It was kind of hard to get into it at first as the beginning remarks read like a technical manual or a history textbook (both of which I don't particularly enjoy to read for entertainment), but the action/battle sequences were all beautifully done. The strategic placing of all the characters made your world believable too. I was actually leaning off my seat in anticipation when Walker and Quatre were dueling. I do however want to know what happened to the POWs from the first chapter... I do recall reading about how they got hauled away but nothing on where they went to. I especially liked the description you gave Trowa as a mismatch of different styles and things clothing-wise, and Quatre's perception of the entire wrongness of it all. The fact that Nanashi still kept the jacket and scarf shows sentimental feelings that he keeps hidden under his stony expression. See.. he used to be part of a pack, but it was annihilated (possibly from the Alliance?). I have the feeling he wears the jacket like a badge of remembrance and chooses to be alone to avoid the pain of familial death.
Damn. XD; WAHH. Well besides the expounded verbosity of the story, I like it. I hope the next update doesn't take too long. :) |
 MissyIrene 2004-12-25 . chapter 1Great story so far. I hope to read more soon. ^_^ |
 Twennysumthin 2004-12-23 . chapter 1Wow! This was soo incredibly cool! Though I must admit, the very begining was a little confusing to me, still is actually.
I'm also a little confused, you have in the begining that they don't know Quatre's family name, but the very next part, they keep calling Mater Quatre, so, do they know now? Or did he just earn the title?
Also, loved the appearance of the Desert Tiger! Him and his coffee fetish, lol. Great job, please continue~ |
 Mousery 2004-12-23 . chapter 1Wow, that's a lot of reading! Heh, but definetly an interesting read. Nice work. :P |
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