There is a slight problem with that logic. They don't have... or at least I have never seen, a phone in the Naruto-verse, since they can just poof into each other's offices and deliver a message.

This is a great little addition to "Hanyou Trials". I can't wait t see more of both stories...ok and here is a hint fr you, don't drink 200oz of hot chocolate in a sitting. I just did and bareley got this review finished before I ran to the bathroom and my bladder burst.bye now

I love this story along with many of the other one that you have wrote and please updtae The Trials of Kimiko soon

nice story

Good to know that your still on Usually I see alot of fanfics unfinished and people never returning to them and etc. Thanks for the message. Good story by the way.

ah no whats with you people and cliff hangers

cols I love the story plot by the way

You HAVE to update this story SOON!

Paragraph breaks in dialogue are distinctly non-optional. This story is illegible due to their lack.

is this part of the hanyou trials?

you really need to seperate the paragraphs, it's harder too read if it's in that form. and you also need to learn how it goes, when someone talks! >.< it hurts my eyes!!

Ex.
"blah." Seres said annoyed.
"Grr." James replyed grinning.

When a different person talks then you have to seperate the paragraphs.

if you want to know more e-mail me!

Kitsu Maharu

Oh and my 4th chapter is out ^_~

i love this fic so much, just like the last one! *happy sigh* i love sequels. life rocks! please update soon. *gives u a pac of pockey, and a big smile* ^_^

I just finished your other story and started this one. It sounds like it will be very good.

5

I really like the story so far. Earlier, I was re-reading the stories written by GuruGuru214. This got me wondering if you got the name idea for Kimiko from reading these stories. Just a thoght of curiousity. I look forward to reading any new chapters to your stories.

Pyros Aves