Great story! Hope you update soon! :)

Well-written and fun to read, but there's one minor hiccup. The books that Yue is reading are a bit anachronistic, considering this is taking place centuries before the events of Cardcaptor Sakura. Shakespeare, I can see, but the more modern novels seem a bit out of place. If you've read the Canterbury Tales, those might be a good candidate to bolster Yue's English literature roster. Aside from that little tweak, it's good stuff. I like it. You use some great words in your descriptions. I'll be back for the next update.

it,s so amusing to see yue jealous of his brother. even if keroberos isn't there yet. i imagine how fun it'll be reading it when clow would have finished creating kero.
interesting chapter. though there isn't as much events as the previous chapters, we learn to know yue a bit more and as i said before, quite amusing.
one question though, why would clow find it fun that yue is doubting himself?

i really do like this story. i hope that you'll continue it soon.

beware of the dangerous grandfather clock!
haha...hilarious!
great chapter. it's interesting how clow created yue. the whole body first then gave it life.

I am liking this so far. :)

Hello,I had read this story quite some time ago, and thought it was so of the best writing I have seen, which says quite a bit. I am a very particular reader, and critize almost everything I read thoroughly. Please keep up the good work.

I love love love love love it! -whimpers- I want more! You are such a good writer!

I LOVE IT! You put so much detail into the little things. It's absolutely wonderful.

I'm sad this is incomplete. Hope you continue soon.

It's a good start, but there's one thing you need to work on. You have a habit of writing run on sentences. This makes the story rather hard to read. Try cutting down your sentences to contain one to two actions at most.

This story is fabulous. It's written so well! It's very refreshing to read a fanfic that goes into such detail with the way the character's minds work. I can't wait until he makes Kero, or until he gets the idea for Yukito! Please post another chapter soon.

this is one of the best ccs fanfics ive ever read! its so cool! please continue soon, i cant wait to see what happens next.

Ah.. This is a wonderful written work. The way words are used in seemingly just the right place make it quite pleasing to read, wherefore other writers make the mistake of embellishing too much, and thus seem to drone on.. You avoided that mistake admirably. Its also amusing, as aside from the knowledge bestowed on Yue beforehand.. there was the instance that accentuated his inexperience..

Well done!

Woohoo!I luv Yue stories ^^ and I surely hope to see more of this one soon ^^