Loved this! The plot twists were awesome. Poor Stanley. )=

Xweet, short, and now I can split my anger at Umbrage over two places instead of condensing it. Dam Johnson, dam him!!

AW! This story was filled with mystery, violence, brotherly lurve, friendship, courage, and psycho new character that always come in 2 chapters before the ending and u have no idea who the ** they are until the end, and heart. I lurved it! ^^ *applauds* That was an awesome story! ^^

oh yeah, and the way you write out their sibling relationship is so cute.. :)

yay!! i love happy endings! (dude, gay and happy mean the same thing...isn't that cool?) anyway..cool story...first of its kind! er, well, at least to me...i've never come across a fic like that :D plus points for originality! and i'm so happy joe's okay...*sniff* write more...maybe you can make the story about girls this time! hehehe..

*goes back to crying again*

o0o0oo0h...i'm not crying anymore but i'm so0o0o0 intrigued..dun dun dun!

Joe! *is crying still* it's so amazing, the way you write...i can totally feel their emotions *cry*

*cries harder* but seriously, though, it's tough...not that i've experienced it, but it's this strange thing with me...like i can totally feel what other people are going thu...it's sad! *cries* i luv ur story *sniff*

wah!! I'm crying for my joe! *sniff* cool story...*sniff*

It was a great story and I encourage you to write more.

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how ood but catchy

Hi, I just have to say I really love this story. I have enjoyed your other stories on this site, Moonstar's and HDA but this one is my Favorite.

Phoenix

Wow...that's all I can say about that story, it was wonderfully written, and I felt like I was reading an actual HB novel. You are an extraordinary writer, this was probably one of the best written stories I've seen in a while, and you did an excellent job keeping the readers in suspense...excellent twist in the story admitting that Biff was gay and had feelings for Joe.

Keep up the good work