Beautiful!

oh my gosh..that was such a good story.

i loved it.

Watch your tenses here, "She's had nightmares before...she knows how real they can be." The rest of the story is in past tense.

This is good. Very personal Trinity/Neo, as well as an especially emotional and well concluded dream sequence. The start is probably the right pace, but some bits could be trimmed off.

That was touching and so real... I liked it

great story, loved every bit of it.

AWESOME story. A new favorite of mine. Thanks so much. Great work!

DM

Loved it! So beautiful and sweet! I really miss this kind of cute Neo-Trin fic!

I've missed seeing great, absolutely brilliantly written, neo and trinity fics. Thank you for writing it! It was completely true to character, written perfectly, with the perfect amount of references to the movie and to what could've happened outside it. I love it and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you

I already left my review at the looking glass.

(I love it!)

See you there

That was a brilliant story. Really well written-go you! I hope it isn't a one off even though it probably is.

awesome! Loved it!

Joey