Thanks for this addition! Nicely done.

This was spectacular! And all of them were true to their characters. I really, really enjoyed this! I was kind of upset that they (the show) never addressed Roxton's wounds. So, reading this was refreshing...and satisfied my curiosity.

Thank you for the perfect end to Prodigal Father.

Good of you to write this. I also thought Prodigal Father wasn't resolved at all. Good characterization here. M acted exactly as she should have. They should have put this in the episode...

Also, I liked how you tied everything together with the Queensbury thread.

You continue to be one of the most consistently good writers here. You capture the characters just right, your details are great, and the writing is balanced. I look forward to reading future stories!

Colorado

Another very worth effort, congratulations.

This was a good fanfic

Susan, your story arc is impressive. I haven't gotten my season I tapes in yet (should be any day now)...but when I do I make sure I view the Prodigal Father post haste. Your continued story line should wrap up those nagging little threads of scriptwriting that needed attention.

What a wonderful and satisfying ending to the story. I wish Susan was really writing for the show.

I think that this is the best fan fiction here. you are extremely talented.

Wrote you some comments under fl_guy on tlw message board under Prodigal Father too.

Awesome job. It was amazing.

Love all your storys you should definitly write more these are so good.

Susan,

Another great ep addition! It was certainly better than the piddly one minute

wrap-up we actually got from the show. The characters were true to form, and

logical. Keep up the good work!

Janet

that was awesome! i loved the emotion that ron felt. the lil crying fest she had was so...what's the word...human. (which sometimes i forget she is) loved the marge/roxton parts, of course. great writing!

Excellent story! You have a great talent for writing a convincing and exciting plotline; the explorers and their characteristics were also wonderfully displayed. Great job, I can't wait to read more! *cough*writeaNedandVeronicastory*cough* :)

OH! GREAT, SUSAN! :) I'm SO grateful that someone wrote a new fic- I've read your other ones 10 times already! I noticed the hint that Kartas got the water from the fountain of Youth; unfortunately, I didn't see "Prodigal Father"...I loved it though...The character relationships-especially Veronica's guilt over stabbing Roxton, Marguerite still distrustful of Kartas-everything! WRITE MORE! :D :D :D -antea