 twisted sweetie 2005-07-24 . chapter 1 Oh. My. God. This fanfic is one of the best I've ever had the pleasure of reading, it was just so good! Look, the only things that are wrong with your fanfic are a few grammaticle errors, if you ever need an editor I am totally there for you, just email me and I will do whatever you want, please, I'm begging you! It would be an honour and a priveledge! But seriously. I loved this fanfic so much, you would not beleive it. The title's great, everything is just awesome. I love Donna Troy, she is my all-time favorite character. ever. I think that you portrayed her beautifully-,INCREDIBLY well done, you should wright for dc, really. Also I want to tell you that there is a new mini-story in the comic book series 'teentitans', and 'the outsiders' where troia is supposedly coming back, *squeales with excitement despite the late hour*, and I think you should check it out... so toodles^_^
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| rubylis 2004-12-28 . chapter 1 This would be a nice story but please, please, *please* proofread it or have someone else check it for you. There are so many mistakes it changes the meaning of what you're trying to say.
Ornaments are what you hang on a tree. Ointment is a type of cream. Sweaty is what you get after a good workout. Sweetie is a pet name for someone. And I suspect Lian hugged his neck tightly not his deck tightly. |
| rubylis 2004-12-28 . chapter 1 This would be a nice story but please, please, *please* proofread it or have someone else check it for you. There are so many mistakes it changes the meaning of what you're trying to say.
Ornaments are what you hang on a tree. Ointment is a type of cream. Sweaty is what you get after a good workout. Sweetie is a pet name for someone. And I suspect Lian hugged his neck tightly not his deck tightly. |
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