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Keeper of the Infinite Library 8/6/10 . chapter 5
The Story is good, the plot is good, The length of the chapers is fine, Your Grammar and Punctuation Seems ok though I wasnt really paying all that much attention to it, I just cant seem to get into the story... I think it is just that it is the wrong Genre for me to get into... but still keep up the good work for those who like it better than me.
Vallavarayan 10/29/09 . chapter 18
nice story till now- hope you update soon.
Chewie Cookies 7/7/09 . chapter 17
Don't worry about the delay. Great story!

Keep up the good work!
RaiderXV 6/29/09 . chapter 18
Nice update, your grammar has improved substantially over the course of the story. I look forward to your next chapter.
Gravity The Wizard 6/28/09 . chapter 18
Interesting Update!
Leaf Ranger 6/28/09 . chapter 18
Wow... so that's your version of Madara? Interesting.

Good flashback. At the very end, you did say Kanto was up to his old tricks again, instead of Kurodo. OTher then that, cool.
Leaf Ranger 6/28/09 . chapter 17
NO problems. Good story, and cool about the kids, and stuff.
ginny917 5/29/09 . chapter 16
PLEASE UPDATE ISN'T A YEAR ENOUGH ?
ginny917 5/29/09 . chapter 1
the yondaime, his father , right
kenkao.inukags 5/13/09 . chapter 2
NAMIKAZE MINATO that is Yondaime Hokage's name. Naruto is Uzumaki because his mother is Uzumaki Kushina. jeez. it's a good story and all but it juts bugs me when ppl get Minato's name wrong cuz his name kicks ass.
ginny917 3/29/09 . chapter 14
the dragon n is Sasuke
gogeta408 2/7/09 . chapter 2
interesting... I was sure you might have gone and changed all the infomation on who the hokages real name was... But it's always fun to read classic fics that were set way before time. I'm going to enjoy more to come. Will review again later.
Patrick S 12/27/08 . chapter 16
great story but you need too update more often
King Hawke 12/11/08 . chapter 16
*whistles and claps* impressive story so far! Hidden in the Stars is original and interesting. I like the cliffhanger ending for the latest chapter. having Hinata and Naruto together and the mom finally awake is nice, instead of her being dead. keep up the good work!
Nightrain and Brownstone 8/14/08 . chapter 2
Naruto's father's name is Minato Namikaze. Otherwise great story though
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