I liked the poem and story. I always thought of Kushami/Lunch/Ranchi as having multiple personalities, or being troubled deep down. Either that, or the slim possible that she might actually be an alien.

It was so painful to read her tale and feel her helplessness in knowing that no one was willing or able to help her...and the ending made perfect sense, seeing that she was rarely or ever seen again after the Saiyan saga.

At least Lunch's pain has ended; poor woman, she deserved better than what she had. =(

I'm sure I've reviewed this before and looking at the publication date, I'd say I have. This is a very good one shot, the only critisim I can think of is that perhaps some of the paragraphs are a little short.

The poem is very good, as is the story it's self if a bit dark and depressing. However I think that in this case it rings true.

Well, I hope the Z-fighters are happy! They caused Lunch to kill herself!! Bleh! Meanies..

I've always loved Lunch, and I thank you for writing about her, even if it was sad.. o_o