although the writing was good i dont really like the concept i mean gene and jim are brothers its a little unsetaling

ALL YOU HOMOPHOBIC FLAMERS SUCK! if you don't like yaoi then don't read it! what a frickin' concept... the flames for this poem ** me off, but now that that's out of my system...
this was really good, regardless of the lack of rhyme. that's not a requirement for poetry. gene/jim is a pairing that i like, despite what others say. nic job!

Oooh, I like! Keep up the good work! (And has anyone else noticed that the same anonymous people keep flaming the yaoi stories in this fandom? o.O Cowards.) But that was kawaii. ^-^

I had to review this, just to SPITE those stupid homophobes, and also because it really is an excellent poem. I don't really care whether stuff is yaoi or non-yaoi, as long as the couple is REASONABLE! This is why I don't ever think like, I dunno, Gene/Harry works... I don't really believe that Gene/Jim exists, but it was a very sweet poem nonetheless. Very... poetic? Lol.

Oh, and you stupid homophobes, if you don't like yaoi, leave it alone!

what the hell is wrong with you?

It's goood. Yap. Yaoi doesn't bother me, though I'm not it's biggest fan. ^^; You did a good job with this.. and all you people dissing this poem can go... ::blinks:: ...sit in a corner and shut your hole. o.O

I love the JimxGene pairing and there's just so little of it! I felt the need to review at least one of your fics since you reviewed one of mine. This just seemed so interesting ^_^ good work no da, keep it up! Ja ne!

you sick person!
i know jim would never think
of gene that way!
man,youre a perv.

nice

*Wipes tears* *Sniff* That was beautiful! Keep on writing.

I like it! I am a yaoi lover, and I have to admit this is . . . interesting. Kinda sad. Please write more!

you suck kill yourself

*cheers* Yah! ^^ I think it's sweet, and it doesn't matter that it didn't rhyme. Now heehee has to write more! lol *runs off to finish her yaoi fic*

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Wowie!!! That was great!!! I love it!! *mutters to herself about how she wanted a break but now will have to break from her lazy spell and start.* GREAT JOB!!! ^__^