I was the person that gave the first review... Though I didn't realise I wasn't logged in... odd.

I was cleaning out my inbox and thought you might like to know that I still enjoyed reading it the second time. And I thought that other review was completely uncalled for.

I thought this was an interesting story in its own right, and that it stuck to the characters personalities - even if it might not be something that would fit in the actual book itself.

Cool story. I ~really~ like the last line. It's hard sometimes to find good ending lines, and you found a great one! Cool. *Grins* Have a nice day

I'm flattered that you used my poetry - but next time, please ask first. Other then that, I quite enjoyed your story! An autor's criticism, through - you jammed too much into too short a space. Try and spread it our some more next time. Hoping you don't mind the advice - and happy holidays - Alowl.

Look, I don't mean to sound harsh, but that was really lame. None of it makes sense. Have you actually read Good Omens, or just the fanfiction?

Yay! I get first review. o.O; I think. Who can tell when it might take 24 hours to upload... *shrugs*

I love how you do footnotes like that, that give a little bit of extra information and add to the humour - XD its a Pratchett like touch. o.O;

I thought this was a pretty interesting story, I found it greatly amusing, and I loved the ending. "Hello Angel" - and hell swore.

I thought it was a brilliant idea, having him turn into an angel again through the holy water. Food for thought!