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| Jokers Sanity 2008-09-04 ch 2, | abusegood story so far from what a read keep up the good work. i was a little weird out cause when i read the line about raven listening to robert smith becasue as soon as i read it they where anounced on mad tv playing a song. |
| Kagome2654 2008-06-23 ch 7, | abuseWell, I must say, it was an interesting story with a good concept. I enojyed reading it, and you're a very good writer. That being said, however, there were a couple of things I didn't particularily enjoy about it, such as the vulgarity and cursing. It's fine every once in a blue moon, but when it starts to become the basis of every outburst of anger, it gets to be less enjoyable for the reader. Another thing, and this might just be me, but when you kept calling her a telepath and an empath... again, nice in variation, but too much of the same thing can get a little bit annoying or maybe boring. Other than that, like I said, fantastic job all around. Keep it up, and I look forward to more of your stuff (if it's got less cursing!). - Sonja |
| Mystique-Angelz 2008-05-09 ch 8, | abuseAw the ending was so cute! Loved it. Nice job! ^^ xoxoxMystiquexoxox |
| diff-r-ent-1 2007-08-29 ch 8, | abusethat was so sweet! i loved this story but there are some thing that i don't get. ah who cares. loved the story and i hope a lot of people reviewed it. ^_^ (i know i did) |
| dragonprincess1988 2007-08-21 ch 8, | abusecute really cute |
| Elissar 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseVery Nice. I'll read the rest tomorrow, it's getting late :p |
| MinokaintheShadows 2007-08-07 ch 7, | abuseGREAT STORY! |
| Regina lunaris 2007-07-17 ch 7, | abusewow! this story is so good!! i loved chapter 7 keep up the great work!! |
| dARKgIRLrAVENgRAYSON14 2007-07-17 ch 7, | abuseAh! what do you mean you need 10 reviews to continue this story!?!?! if i could, i would submit ten reviews to you right now because i want to finish reading this now!! oh, and i know i keep on telling you this, and i know that this story isn't one that contains romance, but i enjoy reading those kinds...so if it will work with the plot, can you make a relationship or romance between Raven and Robin happen? if you already have something planned out and that is out of the question, then you don't have to. you are the authoress of this story...and you are a very good one! hope to see more of you! i have to write this...RAVEN AND ROBIN FOREVER! XD -DarkGirlRavenGrayson14 |
| dARKgIRLrAVENgRAYSON14 2007-07-17 ch 6, | abusee *jumping with excitment* this just gets better and better! is Raven going to die? have to destroy Azarath? will Robin move his freakin butt and just get to her before it's too late! suspense is killing me so i'm going to read your last chapter... -DarkGirlRavenGrayson14 |
| Raven42431 2007-07-17 ch 7, | abuseI absolutly love this story. I've read it over and iver again. can't wait for your update |
| dARKgIRLrAVENgRAYSON14 2007-07-17 ch 5, | abuseRobin is beginning to flirt a little with Rae in the beginning of this chapter...right? sorry if i keep bugging you with that, i just enjoy seeing the two together, and i seemed like he wouldn't mind catching Rae. and how cute...he wanted to watch her sleep...peverted in a way though...oh, and what is Slade planning for Raven? Will her friends find her in time? and Robin, go man go! push that motorcycle as fast as it can go! find Raven!! -DarkGirlRavenGrayson14 |
| dARKgIRLrAVENgRAYSON14 2007-07-17 ch 4, | abuseoh, the horror of it all! Raven can't die! don't die Raven, don't die! *sobbing uncontrolably* -DarkGirlRavenGrayson14 |
| dARKgIRLrAVENgRAYSON14 2007-07-17 ch 3, | abuseoh my gosh! is Robin going to be okay!?!?! liked this chapter and am going to go to the next. i seriously need to ease my nervousness of what happened to Robin! -DarkGirlRavenGrayson14 |
| dARKgIRLrAVENgRAYSON14 2007-07-16 ch 2, | abusewhat is Raven's secret!?! does she have feelings for Robin!?! this isn't supposed to be a romance story, but i enjoy reading those kinds of stories. this one looks very promiseing though! -DarkGirlRavenGrayson14 |