You are a very talented writer/storyteller! Keep up the good work!

OMG... I saw a mistake!! *hangs head*

Hey! I am liking where this is going! Keep it up.

I thought it went together pretty well, you'd be hard pushed to tell who wrote what parts.
It's good stuff, the plot thickens by the looks of it!

Excellent *assumes Gendo position, puts on dark glasses* I will wait fot the next update. Do not test my patience though, otherwise there may be more than mail to deliver *laughs manically*

Another smashing chapter! Keep it up!

Hey! Like the story so far! Keep it up!

I really love the way that the story is going! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!

Great chapter! C ya later! LOL! God luvs ya!
-Bunny Aino

A very nice start! When it comes to good sense of humour, you certainly have it a lot. I look forward to reading the next episode!

If I may suggest though, you could still work on the text format by forming separated sentences instead of writing all the information in one long sentence as means of making your wonderful story reader-friendlier and get its full bloom. Except for this however, there's nothing to complain about. Keep up the great work!

nae so bad at all. original, alot of technical stuff but a verra enjoyable read. i look forward to seing the rest.

heh, I wouldn't worry about length of chapters, the more the better! anyway, a good start, keep it up!

Very good! I wonder who Nagash's wife is. Anywho, I'll try and update Grecian Senshi, but right now, I've got homework and I've got two new fics I'm working on as well. C ya later! LOL! God luvs ya!
-Bunny Aino

Very well put together! I thought the battle and trash talking scenes were pretty faithful to the series, and the story is starting to open up nicely. Just think.. 2 chapters done... another 44 and you'll have a whole series!

Great chapter! I luved it! C ya later! LOL! God luvs ya lots, and thankies for reviewing my ficcie!
-Bunny Aino