I find that i hate unhappy endings, but what I thought would be the end result with a little more angst after to end the story (I thought this when Malchior and Raven sunk into depression and tried to accept their relationship was crewed) turned out to be a pretty satisfying ending. Sure, there's always, "When do they meet again?", but I feel this fic didn't have the usual "Damn the ending cliffhanger" curse, so i thank you for a good read.

I like this, and I have read Red Kree's work, so believe me when I say that you would only be taking your ideas from her if you copy pasted. I hope this has a happy ending.

I really enjoyed this one. It... it was... I can't come up with the words to describe it. Thank you for sharing this story.

I thought this was beautiful...
It was sad and melancholy and it ached with sorrow.
But it was beautiful.
very well done

That was absolutly amazing and beautiful! This story is fantastic.

This is so beautiful, I hope there is a happy ending this time.

fantastically written! well done! great plot line and lets hope malchior will come back!

((O_O)) OMG U JUST GOTTA TELL ME! WHAT HAPPENS?!? -sobs- this is such a sad and beautiful story! -sobs some more-

This story was amazing. I loved how you made the story match the poem like you did, that takes a lot of admirable talent to do so with characters not of your own. Keep writing, you have a lot to say.

great story :D:D:D

i loved it i simply loved it^^

im so going to continue this when i get the chance^^

dude, you need to write a sequel to this. its an awesome story. i love how you put greenday in it. greenday is my all time favorite band. ide love to stay in contact with you and get to know you, you seem like an awesome person.

That's going on my fravoite's list. It's so good, though i did'nt understand why malchior felt so connected to terra. Really brilliant im going to go and read anouther of your fic's your a great writer.

Totally awesome story ^^
My mom yelled at me and now I'm grounded, but I had to read your work!
I love it and I hope to find more stories that rock out loud like this one from you!
..well, when I'm off grounding that is.
Take care and Blessed Be!