other than the spell part (very sketchy needs fine tuning)
very well written im impressed

I love it and I am hoping you update soon.

Your story has a pretty good plot and stuff.. But.. you have some run-on sentences that sometimes doesn't really make much sense. And also, I think that your story is proceeding too fast.

NICE! I luff it!

i loved this chapter. it was so great. i love this story so far. please add more to this story soon. i have a request-lease ad karasu from the dark tounament to this story.-
p.s. happy new year.

i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.

yey ^^ i like you fic ^^ exspecailly the wolves with wings ^^ please continue to write this dtory ^^

i lovew ur story up date soon. i cant wate 4 moer

woops!

aww! so cute!

p.s.s Sorry it took me solong to review. we just moved and the computer was locked up.

Yay ya ya yay. You've updated. And it's still a really good chappie. Cant wait for the next one. Keep up the great work. ps Love the kurama/leah shippe.

do they haveto show there ears?

yay good story

Interesting, a little confusing at times, but very nicely done!